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Viva Bianca by francoclun Viva Bianca by francoclun
A recent commission that took me a long time to finish because in the meantime I moved into a new house.
The format is a little bigger than an A3
As usual, I worked with graphite pencils
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:iconsephiroth097:
Buon giorno, Maestro!
You have asked for a critique, so I will do my best and try to write something valuable.
This is obviously a good picture. Her face has a right pespective. (I truelly like 2/3 perspective! )That makes the picture more action and it is more believable for a viewer. The shading is very decent and gentle, that it makes an intimate atmosphere, the image isn´t so glaring. I also like expression-she looks misteious and seductive. I like your drawing of clothes and especially jewles! It is a bit pity that her hair and eyes look so artificial and the shade spackle above her left eye. There are some strange lines (wrinkles?), it is a purpose?
Sorry if I said something rude, this is just my personal oppinion. I really like your pictures and I admire your job.
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Well, I've been a fan of your works for quite a while now.

But I have mixed feeling about this one. Everything is really phenomenal, but it just seems you didn't really try in this one. The hair doesn't really feel like hair (it's too thick in my opinion) but honestly, everything is perfect. It could have been more detailed as seen in your other works.

Plus, because the hair is not detailed enough, it seems like you cropped the lady out of another portrait and pasted it on a black black paper.

Draw whenever you feel like you really want to, not in order to impress others
:)
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vadim79vvl Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2016
cool
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:iconlibfly:
Libfly Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconfrancoclun:
francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you, I'm glad that you think so :D
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Mahogi Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I have seen some mixed feelings about this picture AND I want to throw in my coin of opinion also.

It's the HAIR that instantly drew my attention, as it made an instant impact (1st point of success).
Entire face looks realistic - such smooth silky skin and then suddenly HAIR! - almost cartoony, cut out of a picture! That seriously surprised me, raised questions, and made me look and look again to figure this out (2nd point of success).
And I figured out that this is what makes the picture UNIQUE (3rd point of success).

Not every picture needs to be 100% finished (the way everyone considers it finished), polished, every single hair and eye lash strand perfect....No. If this picture was perfectionized, I don't think it would even remotely draw my attention this much x) it would be a usual awesome portrait. Now - it's an awesome portrait with a TWIST and that's why I love this piece :)
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blanket86 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful. I love this style and composition. You are great artist! :-)
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ericstavros Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great realism once again master...!!
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Redsterfish Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Professional General Artist
Forget it, Jake, it's Chinatown, I mean, love wire hair :D
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:iconmarkstewart:
markstewart Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015   Traditional Artist
Good to see you back in the game Franco ... haven't seen a piece for a while, nice one too, i loved that series and that was a great character to draw :D
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Skystorm19 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Nice drawing Frankin
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:iconfrancoclun:
francoclun Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much :D
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danUK86 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015   General Artist
great work :)
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francoclun Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks a lot :D
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danUK86 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015   General Artist
welcome :)
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AriannaRizzo Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Maestro....quanto tempo!! stra felice di saperla sempre attivo!! :heart: :onfire: :bounce: 
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francoclun Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ciao, Arianna. Sì, di nuovo attivo dopo un periodo dedicato a lavori diversi (casa nuova). Lieto di risentirti :D
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yelartist Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015
Amazing :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconfrancoclun:
francoclun Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Happy you like it, thanks :D
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:iconcaine-of-nod:
Caine-of-Nod Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Very Cool!
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:iconfrancoclun:
francoclun Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's very kind of you, thank you :D
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Caine-of-Nod Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
You're most welcome :) (Smile) 
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Paul2960 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So happy to see you back at work Franco, a great first drawing of the year! :D
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francoclun Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much, Paul :D
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:icondechezelle:
DECHEZELLE Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
excellent travail
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francoclun Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks, my friend :D
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sameer-patil Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Student
Amazing work!! Wow!
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:iconfrancoclun:
francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Hey, thanks. I really appreciate that. :D

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sameer-patil Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Student
yw :)
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Krasnopiorka Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fantastick!!!! :O
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francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Thank you for your appreciation :D

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Krasnopiorka Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem You are a Genius i am your fan ^^ i wish i could draw like you some day :)
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graphicnovelgirl Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow! I LOVE her hair ... and jewllery and... well, just everything :D (Big Grin) 
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francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Hi, You flatter me. Thank you so much :D

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CONANCELTIC Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
i love  Ilithyia
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:iconfrancoclun:
francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Thank you so much, it is most appreciated. :D

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CONANCELTIC Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
you are welcome my friend
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mathubex Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
meticulously awesome..Sherlock Holmes #1 
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francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

I'm pleased that you like it, thank :D

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Soldier7285 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Her hair looks like threads of finely spun gold. :)
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francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Thanks, really very nice of you to say :D

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Neranella Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
So great ! the details are awesome ! :w00t:
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:iconfrancoclun:
francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

So sweet of you, thanks so much! :D

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Neranella Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015
:tighthug:
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tommyb709 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
nice
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:iconfrancoclun:
francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much :D
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LauraQuiles Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Holy moly...the detail! Fantastic!
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:iconfrancoclun:
francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Thank you! I appreciate your very kind words. :D

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:iconuntuox:
untuox Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
A great portrait of this pervert character.
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francoclun Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Thank you, happy to hear! :D

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untuox Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015
You wellcome, It's my pleasure.
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Justa-Watcher49 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
most engaging face. Hope you love your new house! 
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January 26, 2015
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Camera Data

Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed
1/41 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
42 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jan 25, 2015, 4:26:42 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows)
Sensor Size
4mm
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