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Description
A recent commission that took me a long time to finish because in the meantime I moved into a new house.
The format is a little bigger than an A3
As usual, I worked with graphite pencils
The format is a little bigger than an A3
As usual, I worked with graphite pencils
Image size
800x1176px 614.87 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed
1/41 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
42 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jan 25, 2015, 4:26:42 PM
Sensor Size
4mm
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ImpactBuon giorno, Maestro!
You have asked for a critique, so I will do my best and try to write something valuable.
This is obviously a good picture. Her face has a right pespective. (I truelly like 2/3 perspective! )That makes the picture more action and it is more believable for a viewer. The shading is very decent and gentle, that it makes an intimate atmosphere, the image isn´t so glaring. I also like expression-she looks misteious and seductive. I like your drawing of clothes and especially jewles! It is a bit pity that her hair and eyes look so artificial and the shade spackle above her left eye. There are some strange lines (wrinkles?), it is a purpose?
Sorry if I said something rude, this is just my personal oppinion. I really like your pictures and I admire your job.